Talk:Stats Page (UI Element)

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Reanna Patton 4/24/2026

  • Overall, I would try to use simpler language. For example, there are more common and simpler terms that could be used instead of the word "aggregate" such as "collection" or "total".
  • The Stats Page Layout section, I would take out "Let's learn about the Stats Page of Grooper by understanding its layout." from the bulleted list and use that as a text introduction to the numbered instructions.
  • Number 9 could use a comma after "Kiosk" button. Number 11 could use a comma after the word "window".
  • In the supademo, on slide 4, the formatting of the text in one of the comment boxes seems a little odd.
  • The same comma suggestions I had for the text could be applied in the supademo.